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Hi Tawhiri, It is great to see your writing work on your blog! I like your sentences - they have a subject and a verb like we learnt in reading. You could even simplify them a little more to make them clearer, for example: The volcano is about to erupt.
Hi Tawhiri,
ReplyDeleteIt is great to see your writing work on your blog! I like your sentences - they have a subject and a verb like we learnt in reading. You could even simplify them a little more to make them clearer, for example: The volcano is about to erupt.